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Context: Interior design company updating their website.

Purpose: Review descriptions written by non-native English speaker and propose grammatical and style improvements.

Urban Loft

• ❌ Original Text

  In this apartment we show a simplicity in a form of function, this is an upscale urban feel with a great value.

  We have chosen light colors to brighten the unit and thus it was a great result with which the client was extremely happy.

• ✅ Edited Text

  This apartment is a showcase of simplicity in form and function.

  For an upscale urban feel, we chose light colors to brighten up the unit.

Contemporary Practical

• ❌ Original Text

  This is a contemporary interior design we have created in 2011 in Lithuania for a young couple in the beginning of their life together.

  The combination of colors brings calmness and cozy atmosphere to help relax after a long day in the office or simply to release the stress of the week and enjoy the tranquility of a modern home, easy to maintain and the brightness lifts up the mood.

• ✅ Edited Text

  This is a contemporary interior design we created in 2011 in Lithuania for a young couple starting their life together.

  The combination of colors creates a calm and cozy atmosphere to help relax after a long day and enjoy the tranquility of a modern home.

Coastal Tetralogy 1

• ❌ Original Text

  This first unit we designed in a combination of loft and rustic style. We chose neuter tones and focused mainly on the functionality of the unit.

  As we all know we love the apartment we rent for a holiday to be practical, tastefully decorated and to have everything on a one hand distance.

• ✅ Edited Text

  This first unit we designed in a combination of loft and rustic style. We chose neutral tones and focused mainly on the functionality of the unit.

  As we all know, we want the apartment we rent for a holiday to be practical, tastefully decorated and to have everything on hand.

Coastal Tetralogy 2

• ❌ Original Text

  This is the second unit in our story of 4 parts.

  Here we chose bright and catchy tones for a group of girls going on vacation.

  Different size and colors pillows brig up the mood and helps us here the laughter of girls walking around planning their days during the holiday.

• ✅ Edited Text

  This is the second unit in our 4-part story.

  Here, we chose bright and vibrant tones for a group of girls going on vacation.

  Different sized and colored pillows lighten the mood and almost make us hear the laughter of girls walking around, planning their days.

Coastal Tetralogy 3

• ❌ Original Text

  Part 3. We thought of a mixture of modern and classic styles for a family on vacation.

  Here and there we added a splash of colors to brighten the mood and bring warmth in the apartment with a sweet feeling of home.

• ✅ Edited Text

  For part 3 we thought of a mix of modern and classic styles for a family on vacation.

  Here and there, we added a splash of color to brighten the mood and bring warmth in the apartment, giving guests a feeling of home.

Coastal Tetralogy 4

• ❌ Original Text

  And here is where we let our imagination go wild with extravaganza of colors with industrial style design we made this small unit look bigger and comfortable to spend time in.

  Till date friends and families enjoy out story in 4 parts and the owner of the unit is extremely pleased.

• ✅ Edited Text

  And here is where we let our imagination run wild. With an extravaganza of colors and industrial style design, we made this small unit look bigger and comfortable to spend time in.

  Today, friends and families enjoy our story in 4 parts and the owner of the unit is extremely pleased.